What Do You Want to Read on "After The Call"?

First, thank you everybody for all of your comments and feedback on my "After The Call" series! I've really enjoyed writing these posts and conducting these interviews, and I'm so glad that it has been helpful. Phew! Sometimes I worry if this series is really helpful or not, you know? Insecurities!

Second, I have a few ideas floating around in my head about future posts for the series:
  • How often should you communicate with your agent?
  • What if your book doesn't sell?
  • When should you break-up with an agent?
  • And interviews with authors on what it's like to have multiple offers from editors

Beyond these ideas though, I'm still trying to brainstorm what I should write about in "After The Call."

So I open it up to you! What would you like to read about in "After The Call"? What questions do you have? What would you like to see come next?

Can't wait to hear your responses!

"After The Call": Interview with YA Writer Erin Bowman

After The Call is a series on my blog that chronicles what happens after you get an offer of representation from a literary agent. I aim to answer questions concerning multiple offers, communication, revisions, and even how to break up with an agent. For previous posts in this series, please check out the "After The Call" sidebar. 

It seems like agents have been offering representation left and right for the past few weeks! In December, two of my friends got offers of rep. And in January, this number increased---I had three writing friends who landed agents! 

Hmm, can I be a lucky charm? Perhaps you should rub my head for good luck. :)

One of these friends is the fabulous Erin Bowman, who recently fielded four offers of representation! Erin is a web designer based in New England, and she runs a great blog that you should definitely check out. (Isn't her blog so pretty? *Pets*) Fortunately for me, Erin was kind enough to agree to an interview for my blog!


1.) First of all, congratulaions! Whoa, four offers! Can you tell us about the book that landed you your agent?

Of course! My novel THE LAICOS PROJECT is a YA dystopia – part sci-fi, part thriller – and it landed me the fabulous Sara Crowe of Harvey Klinger.

THE LAICOS PROJECT is about a boy named Gray, who lives in a primitive community where all boys mysteriously vanish upon turning 18. After the disappearance of his older brother, Gray begins to question everything about the place he’s called home and climbs the Wall surrounding his town – a feat which none before him have survived – in search of answers.

There’s a brief, but slightly more detailed synopsis on my website – essentially the bulk of my query letter –for those that are interested: http://www.embowman.com/works-in-progress/

2.) What was your querying process like for this novel? For example, how did you go about researching agents? What was your request rate like?

I did a ton of research before querying. I mean months. I had a giant spreadsheet on agents and I rated and ranked them every which way. I read every interview, agent blog, and/or twitter account I could get my hands on.

I subscribed to Publishers Marketplace and it was worth every penny. I spent countless hours making my query letters perfect and then I queried in mini-rounds, personalizing each and every letter. (There’s a more detailed write-up of my query process on my blog as well: http://www.embowman.com/2011/my-query-process/)

In the end I sent a total of 17 queries and had just shy of a 50% full-request rate. It was pretty darn amazing.

3.) Holy cow, a 50% request rate! Not too shabby. :) Now that you're done with querying, do you have any advice for writers looking for an agent?

I’m going to give some advice that seems simple, but is often tempting to ignore: Take. Your. Time.


  • Seriously. Take a lot of time. Make sure your MS is in tip-top shape before you even think about querying. Then make sure your query is in tip-top shape as well. 
  • Spend the time researching the agents and making sure they are right for you and your work. 
  • Craft that personalized query with love and care for each agent. 
  • Be sure to let the agent know why you chose to query them and why you think your work is something they should care to look at. 
  • Don’t rush, because you really only get one shot with each agent per manuscript. You spent months and years writing the darn novel. 
  • Put the same amount of effort into your queries.

4.) Great advice! I especially like how you emphasize taking your time---I think it's easy to rush this process since we get so excited! Anyway, what was your reaction when you got your first offer?

I beamed. A lot. So widely I thought my face my split in two. Then I almost cried. I was just so happy and relieved at the same time that I barely knew how to react. I was on Cloud Nine until the multiple offers started rolling in. I felt I clicked with every agent that I spoke with, and so that’s when things got really difficult.

It’s an exciting and wonderful position to be in, but juggling all those offers is no easy feat.

5.) How did the agents offer rep? Via email? Or a cold call?

Out of my four offers, three reached out by email, but did not “officially” offer until we got on the phone. One offer was a straight cold call. I also had a phone chat with two other agents, who while bowing out, still took the time to call me and say some very nice things about my work. The entire process was very humbling.

6.) After you set up times to speak with the agents, what sort of questions did you ask them? Which questions did you find to be the most helpful in making a final decision?


I had a big list when I talked to agent #1, but by the end of the process, I had it boiled down to three main questions:

  • What sort of revisions/edits do you feel my story needs? What’s your vision for the book?
  • Do you consider yourself an editorial agent or more hands-off?
  • What would your submission plan be like for this project (number of editors you’d approach, timelines, communication process throughout, etc)?

Answers to these questions can tell you an awful lot about an agent’s style, communication habits, and business smarts. Oh, and one other thing: Ask if you can contact some existing clients for referrals. Hearing what other writers have to say about their agent is simply invaluable.

7.) How did you end up choosing only one agent? Sales record? Client referrals? Phone conversation?  

All the agents I spoke with were fabulous, so I’m not going to lie and say it was easy. It was hard. Really hard. There were definitely a few nights when I was pulling out my hair and stressing and wondering how I would ever reach a decision. In the end, there was no magic formula. It was just a gut reaction.

I think I knew, deep down, right after hanging up from my very first call with Sara, that she was the right choice for me. And that was a little tough to swallow because up until that moment I had thought someone else was the right choice. It took a little time for my emotions to settle and my heart to align with where my brain was already headed.

A big part of picking an agent is an emotional factor – I wanted to click with an agent. But I also wanted an agent I could trust from a business side of things, someone who was savvy and knew the industry inside and out because as a first-time novelist, I knew I couldn’t navigate those waters alone.

For me, Sara was both of these things. I knew Sara would be a fantastic advocate for both my book and my career, that she would do everything imaginable to find my novel the best home, both here and abroad, and that she would be accessible, supportive and honest every step of the way. And so I signed with her, and the rest is history. I am so excited, and humbled, to have Sara as my agent.

8.) Looking back now, what sort of advice do you have for writers who find themselves with multiple offers? What should they do? What shouldn't they do?

Obviously follow up with anyone who has your materials (be it a query, partial, or full). Let them know you have an offer and give them the chance to respond within a time frame that you set (7-10 days, usually). Some may bow out, some may not respond, but I think you’ll be surprised at how many promptly request your full.

But that’s the standard stuff. This is what I wish I had known ahead of time: Getting multiple offers is amazing and wonderful, but it is extremely stressful. You will freak out. You will flip-flop. You may even make your decision and then start wondering if it was the right one. All of this is normal. You are not alone. It’s a huge decision and it is natural to be anxious and hesitant and uncertain.

Just remember to take a deep breath and relish in the fact that you’ve made it this far – you’ve snagged an agent. Go you! If you listen to both your heart and head while making the decision, you will end up with the very best agent for you. And that’s what matters. This is your agent, your career, and the beginning of the next step!

Thanks so much for this interview, Erin! Best of luck with your novel! 

Re-Reading an Old Manuscript

Do you guys ever read your old pieces of writing?

I do! Old essays, abandoned manuscripts, unfinished drafts of dreadful poetry. I especially like reading my high school diaries: "No boys like me! I must be the ugliest monster on Earth! Nobody asked me to Homecoming! I have the worst life EVER!" 

Ha. Melodrama. I had it in spades back then.

Anyway, I couldn't sleep last night (that's what happens when you take a nap at 6PM) and so I decided to re-read my MG space opera. I was curious at what to expect. Would I like it? Hate it? Cry with joy that I had a bestseller on my hands? (Ha! Melodrama. Again.)

Initially, I freaked out. Why did I word that sentence that way?! Why did I use "quite" so often?! Why didn't I put more "quites" in the story?! But then I calmed down a bit and let myself read my story with fresh eyes. It was really interesting---and even fun!---to re-visit this manuscript.

The most fun part, I think, was re-discovering a character named Rigel, an alien who hails from Saturn's moon Titan. I modeled Rigel's appearance after the Draenei race in World of Warcraft, which you can see below.

(Why yes, my husband and I used to play Warcraft! Why yes, we are both nerds!)

Rigel has a tough-looking exterior---seven feet tall, blue skin, a powerful Knight tasked with protecting the solar system---but he's a softy at heart. For one thing, he loves pastries, especially crepes filled with strawberries. For another, he has a penchant for getting himself into strange predicaments, like an unfortunate tousle with a Martian spitting camel. 

He's sort of that crazy uncle who always tells you the weirdest stories and who gobbles down your cupcake when you're not looking. (That is, if you had a blue-skinned uncle from outer space. With a penchant for sweets.)

It was a fun trip down memory lane! So what about you guys? Do you ever find yourself re-reading old materials? Find any gems? Or horrid embarrassments? :)

Friday Five: Snowpocalypse Edition

Ahhhh! Snow! So much effing snow!

1.) The Snowpocalypse strikes again! On Wednesday, it snowed and snowed and snowed here in the DC area. Fortunately, I was at home, curled up by my space heater. Unfortunately, Justin was stuck in traffic...

For EIGHT hours.

That's right! My poor husband. He tried so hard to get home sooner, but what can you do when traffic doesn't move for three hours straight and then the state decides to close down the entire Beltway? Ahhh! I'm just so glad he made it home safely. Whew!

2.) Evidence of the Snowpocalypse in DC. (I took a picture of the snow at my house, but I can't find that wire thing to upload them. Fail.) Photo courtesy of the Washington Post.



3.) We've been holed up at home for past day and a half since most stores/restaurants are closed. This got me thinking... Why hasn't someone invented a freaking transporter yet? You know, that cool contraption from Star Trek? WANT! If I had a personal transporter, I would totally be in Paris right now eating pastries. Then I'd hop over to Australia to pet a koala bear. And then I'd finish my day at a warm beach in Tahiti. Um yeah. Transporter = Best Invention Ever.

4.) Stay tuned this weekend for another post in my "After The Call" series: an interview with YA writer Erin Bowman! Just last week, Erin received FOUR offers of representation and she kindly agreed to be interviewed for my blog. Also, did you know that Erin is made of awesome? She designs cool websites, runs a great blog, and loves cupcakes and ramen as much as I do!

5.) So...if you had a transporter, where would you go this weekend?

Hope you're all doing well!

"After The Call": Please, Please Contact the Agents Who Have Your Query!


Yesterday morning, I came across a tweet from Agent Jessica Faust that made me cheer:

If you get offer of rep, notify even those agents who have queries (if you're interested in them repping you too) so everyone has equal time.

Yes! Yes! This is such great advice!

See, when I received my first offer of representation, I had no idea what to do with the agents who had my query. I had 9 outstanding queries---and I would've loved to get these agents' responses. But at the same time, I'd often heard that I should only notify the agents who had my full or partial. So what to do? What to do?

Then I came across this post by Agent Elana Roth. In the post, Ms. Roth talked about her frustration over reading a query, getting interested in it, and then learning that the author had already accepted an offer elsewhere. Her reaction was three-fold:

First: well, shucks. Second: How did that happen in the 2 weeks since the query came in? And third: why didn't you tell me you got an offer?

After reading this, I thought to myself: "Well, what do I have to lose?" I decided to send notifications to the 9 agents who had my query (I had sent these queries in the past month) and here are the results...

1 No response
1 Form rejection
2 Personalized rejections, wishing me the best (They were so nice!)
5 Requests to read the full!

I was blown away. I thought most of the agents would 1.) ignore me, or 2.) reject me straight away. But over half wanted to read my material! Indeed, TWO of the agents told me they had planned on requesting my novel, but simply hadn't had the time to do so yet. Squee! And so, I sent off my manuscript ASAP and crossed my fingers.

This happened almost a year ago, but I'm so glad I went ahead and alerted the agents. (Ultimately, they all passed but two were close calls.) Now, whenever a friend of mine gets an offer, I always tell her to notify the agents who has her queries. What does she have to lose, right? And you know what? Several of these agents have gone on to offer representation to my friends. So cool, right?

Of course, there are a couple guidelines to stick by when doing this.

First, make sure the agents don't have a policy where they only want to be notified concerning partials and fulls.

Second, I would only notify the agents who haven't replied to you in the past four weeks or so. Any longer than that, I would figure that the agent isn't interested. (But that's just me.)

What do you think? Agree? Disagree? Be sure to post any questions if you have any! :)



ETA: My friend Corinne Duyvis brings up a good point. Some agents take longer than a month to respond to queries so you may want to bump up your time-table to two months rather than one. Thanks, Corinne! 

Teaser Tuesday!

Wow, I've never posted a teaser on my blog before. Aieeee! It's pretty scary. Okay, it's really scary. But it can be fun too, right? Right?!

Below, you'll find the opening from one of my middle grade projects, tentatively titled "Jupiter Crashing" because I couldn't think of anything better. (I'm terrible with titles.) This novel is set about 200 years into the future, and it chronicles the story of Grace Salinger---a twelve-year-old girl aboard a spaceship bound for Jupiter's largest moon, Ganymede. Grace and her family will soon become the newest colonists on this moon...but then disaster strikes. Dun dun dun!

Without further adieu...


          Right before she opened the airlock, Grace Salinger checked over her spacesuit.
          Oxygen levels? Check.
          Pressurization? Check.
          Squeegee and window cleaner? Check on those, too.   
Grace had done this a dozen times already, but she wanted to be extra careful. Outer space was no playground—it could freeze a girl into a popsicle in five seconds flat. At least, that’s what her Grandpa had always said.
Letting out a deep breath, Grace pushed the airlock open and hooked her tether to the clip on the ship’s outer hull. She tugged on the tether once, twice, and then thrice to make sure it had hooked on properly. Then, she let herself fall.
Her arms went weightless.
Her legs dangled free.
Her whole body floated through the black ocean of space.
It felt like she was swimming—only this was a thousand times better. Grace couldn’t help but smile, reminded of the long afternoons she used to spend in her grandfather's backyard pond. Her smile faltered a little. There wouldn't be any ponds where she was going now. 
With a turn of her head, Grace stared upward at the giant planet of Jupiter, which loomed a few thousand miles in front the ship. The planet looked like a huge piece of lasagna with its layers of red and orange and white gases. The only thing it needed was some parmesan cheese and a tall glass of soda. A delicious astronomical dinner.   
Up ahead, Grace could also make out the rocky surface of Jupiter’s largest moon Ganymedetheir final destination. In a few short days, the 200-person crew of the USS Maryland would land on Ganymede's surface and become the newest colonists on the frozen world.
            But first, Grace had chores to do.

I'm not too thrilled about the first sentence to be honest. I think it reads a little awkwardly. I've been trying to brainstorm new ones but I'm not sure if any of them are better:

Option 1: "With her helmet in hand, Grace Salinger looked down to double-check her spacesuit."

Option 2: "Grace Salinger snapped on her helmet and proceeded to double-check her spacesuit."

Hmmm, lots to ponder! But first, I must finish my YA dystopian... 

Who Wants to Go to a Writers' Conference?

I really wish I could attend the SCBWI Winter Conference in New York City this weekend, but alas I cannot. (Impromptu trips to Hawaii will do that to you!) Fortunately, there will be a regional SCBWI conference not far from where I live in March, and I definitely plan on attending that. Plus, it's pretty cheap!

Here's the info:

"Spring Into Action"
SCBWI MD/WV/DE
March 12, 2011 (8:50AM - 5:15PM) 
Bishop Clagett Retreat Center
Buckeystown, Maryland

I'm pretty excited because the conference faculty includes a few fantastic editors from Dial Books and Marshall Cavendish as well as amazing authors like Kathi Appelt, who wrote the Newbery Honor-winning novel The Underneath. Even better, Rosemary Stimola will be there! She represents Suzanne Collins so I must bow down to her.

If you're in the DC area and if you write for kids/teens, you should definitely think about coming! Definitely let me know if you register---we could carpool or something!

Aaaannnddd lastly, I've already been thinking about what I'll wear. (Haha. Why do I love getting dressed up so much?!) I really want the purse shown below but it costs, like, $400. Egads!

Friday Five!

It has been awhile since I've done one of these posts so I thought it'd be fun to start 'em up again!

1.) I'm in Indianapolis with my husband's family right now, getting ready for my father-in-law's memorial service. It's a sad occasion to be gathering for, but I love any opportunity to see my two-year-old niece! She makes my heart melt, even when she's crying over her lost bink or refusing to go to bed. She's simply too cute and she even calls me "Auntie Cawaline." Awww!

2.) I had a great time this week getting together with some of my writerly friends: the hilarious Ellen Oh, the fabulous Alexa Barry and Emily Kelly (I know you've changed your name, Em, but you will always be Emily Kelly to me!), and the illustrious Lynn Colt.

It was also so fun to finally meet Meagan Spooner, who I've been emailing back and forth for a few months. She lives in Australia currently but is visiting her family here in DC. I can't wait for her to move back to the area so we can eat cupcakes and talk about books!

3.) Speaking of friends, does anyone want to attend Amy Chua's upcoming event at Politics & Prose with me? It's on February 18th. I'm sure the event will be pretty packed due to all of the press surrounding her memoir, The Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, but I think it'll be worth it!

4.) Thanks to the aforementioned Lynn Colt, I'm reading Shade by Jeri Smith-Ready. It's a YA urban fantasy (or maybe it's more paranormal? I get these genres mixed up!) and it's quite good so far. It's about a girl who can see ghosts, namely the ghost of her boyfriend who recently passed away. The twist in the story is actually really interesting: every person under 16 can see ghosts, not just the main character. Nobody knows why this "Shift" happened, but the protagonist is gaming to find out.

5.) My WIP (a YA dystopian) is coming along well---it's even keeping me up at night as I try to work out its plot twists and character arcs! I'm thinking about sharing a teaser next week, but we shall see... That kind of freaks me out!

So what sort of things are you guys doing this weekend? Read any good books you want to recommend to me? :)

After The Call: Interview with YA Writer Kate Hart

"After the Call" is a new feature on my blog! It chronicles what happens after an agent offers you representation: how to choose the right agent, how to communicate with your new agent, what the revision process is like, etc. For previous posts in this series, please click hereherehere, and here.

Today at Adventures in Space, I'd love to welcome the fabulous Kate Hart! I've been a fan of Kate's blog for awhile now and I also love her posts at YA Highway. (Haven't read YA Highway? Go read it right now!)

I thought Kate would be the perfect writer to interview for the "After The Call" series because she received a whopping SEVEN offers of representation a few months ago! Holy cow! How in the world did she choose between them?!

Read on to find out!

1.) Can you tell us about the book that landed you your agent?

After The Fall is a contemporary YA. It's my second book, about a girl who's in love with her best friend but sleeping with his brother.

2.) Oh, cool premise---I'm really intrigued to find out how your novel all plays out! So what was your querying process like for this book? For instance, how many queries did you send out? And what was your request rate like?

I actually have a long blog post on the process here, but the short answer is ten full requests. I ended up with seven offers, one "this would have been an R&R," two "no thanks but good luck"s, one query rejection and one no response.

3.) Now that you've found representation, what kind of advice do you have for writers looking for an agent?

Definitely avail yourself of the many, many resources out there. For finding agents, Publisher's Marketplace is worth the membership fee. For queries, Query Letter Hell on Absolute Write is amazing-- even if you don't put your own query up for critique, you can learn a ton from what's there. 

It's helpful to get feedback from people who both have and have not read your book, and I had a lot of help. The girls at YA Highway went above and beyond the call of duty. I bet they looked at fifteen drafts, at least. Several other wonderful writer friends also pitched in, as did an intern friend. 

A lot of agented and published writers post about their query process, and Twitter chats like #askagent taught me a lot. I also had the advantage of writing the Friday round up at YA Highway, which meant I saw a ton of advice. (And speaking of YA Highway, we have a series that features our real queries along with commentary from our agents. /shameless plug)

I'll also say that having a visible online presence helps. Before my first book was even finished, two agents contacted me to request that I query them-- one found my blog through her client, and the other through Absolute Write.

4.)  Huh, interesting! I can see how blogging and getting involved online can really help in landing representation.

What was your reaction after you got your first offer? Were you jumping your joy? Or jittery with anxiety? (I was so anxious when I got my first call!)

I was on a plane, coming home from the SCBWI conference in Los Angeles, and was fairly sure an offer was coming. My seatmate and I had been talking, and as soon as we touched down in Dallas, she was like, "Check your messages! Check them!" So I did, and lo and behold, I had a message. When the agent said, "And yes, I am offering representation," I did a spastic little dance in my seat, and my seatmate joined me. We may have gotten some odd looks.

I had to race around the airport because my connecting flight had changed terminals, but finally I got to make some breathless calls at the gate to my husband, my mom and my best friend. That's when the squealing started. Then I still had another hour-long flight and an hour's drive home before I could celebrate! I may or may not have had a dance party in the car though. 

5.) Oh man, that's awesome! I love that you got your first offer on a freakin' airplane! So how did the agents offer rep? Via email? Or a cold call? 

Everyone set up a phone call. Some made it clear they were offering, and some waited until the end of the call to say it.

6.) Ah, neat! My agent actually called completely out-of-the-blue, which floored me! It's interesting to compare and contrast. Anyway, what sort of questions did you ask the offering agents?

I have a post on that too! The most revealing question was about revisions. Always, always make sure your vision meshes with theirs.

7.) With seven great offers, how in the world did you end up choosing only one? Sales record? Client referrals?

All of those things went into consideration, but in the end I just had to trust my gut. Michelle and I talked on a Thursday, and she obviously just got my book. She also offered to fly out to Arkansas, so her enthusiasm was definitely not in doubt (Arkansas in August is not an offer one makes lightly. Unless one likes 100 degree weather + humidity.) 

Anyway, over the weekend, she read my other book, Refuge. When she sent me suggestions for it a few days later, my jaw dropped. My best friend was across the room and she asked what was up, so I forwarded her the notes. She read them, looked up and said, "So you're going with Michelle, huh." 

8.) Looking back now, what sort of advice do you have for writers who find themselves with multiple offers? What should they do? What shouldn't they do?

As soon as you get an offer, notify everyone who has your manuscript, as well as anyone who hasn't responded to your query. After all, you only queried agents you really wanted (right? right??), and you don't want to miss your chance. I actually notified two agents who had fulls of my other manuscript, and ended up with offers from them. You just never know.

Give the agents a reasonable amount of time to read your book-- I said ten days, which gave them two weekends. Also, I can't stress enough the importance of a phone call or face to face meeting. You wouldn't marry a blind date (at least I hope not). Don't choose your agent that way either.

Thank you so much for answering my questions, Kate! Best of luck to you while you're on submission!

After The Call: Revisions, Revisions, Revisions!

"After the Call" is a new feature on my blog! It chronicles what happens after an agent offers you representation: how to choose the right agent, how to communicate with your new agent, what the revision process is like, etc. For previous posts in this series, please click hereherehere, and here.

Right after you sign with an agent, there will be much merry-making, cupcake-eating, and champagne-drinking. Huzzah, you have an agent! Rejoice, rejoice!

Bask in this glory while you can... In a matter of weeks, your agent will send you his revision notes and then there shall be much gnashing of teeth, crying of tears, and screaming of pain. Welcome to agented life!

Haha, I know I'm being melodramatic but, chances are, you're going to go through at least one revision process with your agent. With the publishing industry becoming pickier and pickier due to the flailing economy, your book needs to be sparkly clean before it goes on submission. So roll up your sleeves and grab your trusty red pen. Time to get to work!

My own revision process with Jim went a little like this:

May 2010 --- Signed my contract and mailed it to New York. Sobbed with joy and thanked the Writing Gods profusely.

June 2010 --- Received revision email from Jim. Stopped my rejoicing and sobbed with grief instead. Jim's comments were spot-on and gracious, but I was nevertheless overwhelmed. I decided to let his notes percolate in my mind for a couple weeks.

July 2010 --- Started tackling the minor suggestions Jim had made (fleshing out certain chapters, clarifying a confusing scene, etc). I needed to start small since the big changes still scared me.

August 2010 --- Tackled the big picture edits, like character arcs. Cried. Sent Jim an email concerning my revisions and he was very supportive.

September 2010 --- Edited some more. Mailed shiny manuscript to Jim. Bit nails in anticipation. Received email from Jim a few days later...we were ready to go on sub!

Every agent is different, of course, but I think my experience is generally the norm. Some agents prefer to give notes via email while others over the phone. Some agents prefer to line-edit a manuscript while others prefer to give general notes. Either way, most agents I've researched like to make at least a few changes to a book before they deem it ready for submission.

Here's a general breakdown of my observations and my own experiences:

1.) Time Frame
It can take between a couple weeks to a couple months to receive your revision notes. I know---a couple months sounds like a long time but agents are busy people and sometimes they get swamped. Try to be patient as you await your notes, especially if you sign during a busy time of the year (BEA, summer conference season, Christmas, etc.). However, if you haven't heard from your agent in awhile and you were supposed to get your notes two weeks ago, then feel free to send a quick email. Most likely, she'll get to it soon!*

2.) Deadlines
Some agents like to give deadlines while others don't. It just depends. My agent, for example, didn't set a hard deadline for me to finish my revisions. He told me to work within my own time frame, which was ideal for me because 1.) I work slowly and 2.) I had to deal with some family issues. On the other hand, my friend's agent gave her a month to turnaround her book. This agent is fantastic and successful, and she simply prefers to set deadlines for her clients.

3.) Scope
When it comes to your revisions notes, the scope of the notes will depend on your agent's editing style. From what I've observed, some agents like to give heavy line edits while others only give a few suggestions. Thus, revision notes can vary widely!

In my case, I received about a two-page revision letter from Jim. The email itself was organized into two main categories: big picture edits and short critiques of certain chapters that needed re-working. I really appreciated this format so I could tick off the stuff I had finished and focus on the things I still needed to change.

Other agents, however, prefer to do more in-depth revisions. In a recent blog post, Agent Suzie Townsend mentioned that her editorial letters stretch over seven pages on average! Wow! On the other hand, some agents offer only a few suggestions here and there. One of my critique partners recently signed with an agent like this. Fortunately, my friend likes a more hands-off style when it comes to editing because she relies on her critique groups for comments and suggestions.

I hope this has been a helpful post! Feel free to leave a comment or send me an email if you have any questions!

*That being said, I've known a few writers who have waited months and months and months...and who are still waiting for notes. Yipes! If three months go by and you're still twiddling your thumbs, I'd suggest having a frank conversation with your agent. (Who knows? Maybe he has a legitimate reason.) 

Are Chinese Mothers Superior?

I was raised by a Chinese mother.

As a kid, I was often forced to do a lot of things I hated: 

* Playing piano
* Playing violin
* Attending extra math classes
* Attending Chinese school

I was also banished from certain activities that my mother didn't see fit. No Girl Scouts. No equestrian. No trombone. (Oh, how I loved the trombone!) Of course, my mom was a real softy at heart, but she made it clear that she was the Ultimate Ruler in our house. 

Growing up, I often resented my mom's strictness. I wanted to watch TV! I hated playing violin! But now as an adult,  I'm grateful for certain things my mom "forced" me to do. I got good grades in college due to the high academic standards she instilled in me. And playing piano for ten years? I appreciate music so much more and my piano skills have come in handy throughout the years.

The reason I bring this up is because of a Wall Street Journal essay I just read: "Why Chinese Mothers Are Superior" by Amy Chua, a professor at Yale Law School. In the piece, Chua explains why so many Asian children become math whizzes and music prodigies. The key to such success? Pushing your kids to become high achievers. Instead of worrying about their child's self-esteem and desires, a Chinese mother pushes and pushes and pushes her kid until she gets straight A's, plays piano with perfection, and excels in every endeavor.  

Not surprisingly, Chua's article has unleashed a firestorm on the web. Her essay has received over 6000 comments, and Chua has even received death threats since its publication. Numerous Asian-Americans have been appalled by Chua's thinking, questioning why she would continue the traditions of her parents when Chinese mothering can cause so much distress and frustration in kids. 

Through it all, however, Chua stands by her statements. She argues that Chinese mothers ultimately want what's best for their children---they just have different ideas on how to how to achieve that. 

Have any of you guys read Chua's essay? If so, what do you think? Are her parenting methodologies too draconian? Or do the ends justify the means?

Adventures in Scuba Diving and Puking

On Tuesday morning, Justin and I headed out for a fun day of scuba diving on Oahu. Justin was hoping to see a shark or two but I was preoccupied with the thought of spotting a turtle. Turtles! They are so awesome! I crossed my fingers and prayed to the ocean gods that I would see one on our dive...

After we reached the dock, our boat left port and we chugged into the blue waters off of Waikiki. As the shore drifted farther and farther away, the waves started to get choppy. Up and down, up and down. And I started to feel a little nauseous. Uh oh... Luckily, we reached our first dive destination and the cool water made me feel better. Look, I'm diving, Ma!


About ten minutes into our dive, our dive instructor signaled me to hurry over toward him because...HE HAD FOUND A GIANT SEA TURTLE! Eeeek! Justin and I don't know if it was a male or female turtle, but we decided to call it Myrtle. 


Alas, our first dive ended far too soon and we were forced to climb back onto the boat. As we departed for our next dive site, I started to get that "Uh-Oh" feeling again. Nausea. Headache. Sour stomach. Next stop: Puke City!

Indeed, I ended up chucking my breakfast over the side of the boat. Not my most glamorous of moments, I tell you! At least Justin was there to hold my hair and pat my back. Poor guy. Everyone else was chatting and having fun and he had to babysit his green-faced wife. He wins the Husband of the Year Award!

Anyway, it was time for our second dive and we saw some cool things: bright yellow fish, a harlequin shrimp, and even a mean-looking eel. But the coolest creature we saw was an awesome red octopus:


Funnily enough, I was hardly paying attention to the octopus when this picture was taken. See, a few seconds earlier, I had rammed straight into a sea urchin. A sharp pain had shot up from my knee and my eyes went wide when I saw eight long urchin spikes sticking out of my leg. Ow, ow! As I tried to yank them out, our guide waved me over to take the picture of the octopus. I quickly complied before staring at my leg again and wondering if sea urchins were poisonous...

Good news: sea urchins are not poisonous to humans!
Bad news: sea urchin spines are ridiculously hard to pull out! 

All in all, it was a fun day! I'll do it all again---vomiting, et all---for the chance to see Myrtle again!

Sometimes I really wish I had an iPhone

Justin's iPhone is like magic! It takes pictures. It records videos. It offers internet access. It even has a freakin' flashlight function. 

*Eyes iPhone jealously*

Maybe when I'm a super-rich-very-famous author I shall buy myself one of these amazing contraptions... Until then, here are some pics and videos of our trip so far! 

 Lovely Waikiki! This was taken a few hours after I landed---I was running on about 3 hours of sleep. Thus, the glazed eyes and zombie face. 

At Pearl Harbor. I was going to poke fun at Justin for making such a serious face in this photograph, but then I remembered that we were standing right above the remains of the USS Arizona and the hundreds of men who died within its walls. Hmm, yeah. Not exactly a time for smiling!

Sunset! This is one of those pictures I wish I could I jump inside and live in forever.


At the Waikiki Aquarium. Fortunately, we arrived at the Aquarium just in time for the feeding of the Hawaiian Monk Seals! Once the seals noticed the buckets of fish, they started barking at each other angrily. It was hilarious! And man, they are quite cute. :o)

Oh, on the reading front, I've finished three books on my trip so far: The Wave, Confessions of the Sullivan Sisters, and The Pillars of the Earth. All good reads, but The Pillars of the Earth was a bit tedious at times. Plus, I'm not sure how I feel about the way women are portrayed in the book. So much discussion over their physical qualities, especially boobs! Sure, boobs are great but do I really need to know how a character's breasts have changed over the course of three decades?

Well, off to dinner, I suppose! Tomorrow we go scuba diving for the first time since September. I'm a little nervous. Part of my brain is still convinced that my lungs will explode!

After The Call: Interview with YA Writer Meagan Spooner

"After the Call" is a new feature on my blog! It chronicles what happens after an agent offers you representation: how to choose the right agent, how to communicate with your new agent, what the revision process is like, etc. For previous posts in this series, please click here, here, and here.

My friend Meagan Spooner is pretty awesome. First, she lives in Australia. Second, she has a kick-ass blog. And third, she recently received FIVE offers of representation for her YA novel! How amazing is that?! Five! *Faint*

Since Meagan is so nice and kind, she agreed to share her experiences in choosing the right agent on my blog. Below, she offers her advice on researching agents, writing queries, and picking the best agent for her career. Welcome, Meagan!

1.) First, yaaaayyy for signing with Adams Literary! Can you tell us a little about the book that landed you with this awesome agency? What's the genre? What's it about?

Thank you!  To say "I’m excited" is a total understatement. I'm just about to head into revisions for THE IRON WOOD, my young adult dystopian fantasy, and having Josh’s advice and guidance is just invaluable. 

THE IRON WOOD takes place centuries after a magical apocalypse wipes out the world as we know it, leaving the only known survivors huddled behind a magical barrier in the remnants of Washington D.C. The story is about a girl with unique powers who discovers she’s being targeted in secret by the city’s scientists, and rather than spend her life as one of their experiments, she flees beyond the barrier. There she meets a wild boy with equal parts charm and crazy, who agrees to help her find the Iron Wood, a legendary place where people like her can be safe.

2.) Oh, so cool! I love that it's set in D.C. as well. (Represent!) Can you tell me about your querying process like for this novel? 

I started doing agent research more or less immediately after getting the idea for the book.  Every week or so I’d add another agent to my radar, whether it was someone I’d heard of from another writer friend, or the agent of an author I loved, or just an agent whose blog I stumbled across and liked. 

By the time I finished the first draft I already had a couple dream agents, and a list twenty agents long who I thought would be great for my book. From there I just kept adding, until I had a list of about forty agents, ranked in order of preference.  I chose them based on a lot of factors, including sales record, whether they represent authors I liked, how editorial/involved with their clients they were, etc. 

I originally sent out 13 queries, to my top agents. One of my dream agents actually rejected me within hours of receiving my query, which completely crushed me! I responded by panicking a bit and sending out another ten queries, and then some more, until I got a full request from another dream agent and calmed down a little.  By that point I had sent out about 30 queries, and decided to call a halt to the crazy until I started getting some real responses.

3.) How long were you querying before your first offer? 

I ended up with 16 full requests out of about 20 or 25 who responded. My first offer of representation came two and a half weeks after I sent the first query, and a little over a week after that I signed with Josh.

4.) Yowza! What a great request rate! Now that you're done with querying, do you have any advice for writers looking for an agent---writing queries, tweaking queries, sending out queries? 

I participated in a great contest and workshop held by Adventures in Children’s Publishing to help polish up our query letters. To enter you had to submit a 175-word pitch--no longer than that! As you can no doubt tell, I'm pretty wordy, and this was the biggest challenge for me. Reducing my novel down to a couple of sentences was torture! But it proved invaluable, because having a short, snappy pitch is the best way to go.

Once you have your pitch, DO YOUR RESEARCH. Follow the agents as much as you can, whether it be on Twitter, their blogs, or their clients’ blogs (sometimes clients will mention their agents or do interviews with them). Check out places like Absolute Write, Preditors and Editors, and Casey McCormick’s Agent Spotlight.  You can find out exactly what kind of letter they like, whether they like you to open with personalization or launch right into the pitch, etc.

5.) What's the biggest lesson you learned from querying?

If you receive an offer, inform the other agents who have your manuscript, but also consider informing those who have your query but haven’t responded yet. This is especially important if you get your first offer quickly.  Most of the agents who ended up offering in my case hadn’t even read my query by the time they got my email saying I’d received an offer.  If I hadn’t sent out a feeler to them, they would never have had time to get interested, and I never would have gotten to hear what they had to say!

6.) So you get your first offer...what was your reaction? Scream in elation? Jump for joy? Faint? :)

I always imagined bursting into tears and running around the house and jumping up and down. Weirdly enough, when it actually happened I had very little reaction. The first call with the offering agent didn’t culminate in an offer--we talked about the book, and then I took a few days to think about their revision suggestions before talking again, at which point I did receive the offer. Everyone else who heard about it was elated for me, but I just sort of sat there like a lump for the next three or four days. 

It sounds a bit corny, but I don’t actually remember too much from those few days. It sounds really hard to believe, given that The Call is the dream! But up until that moment, everything was hypothetical. Once you sign with an agent, though, you're for real.  You're moving forward. Suddenly it's your career, and you're expected to make this decision that could impact your whole life. I wasn't remotely prepared for that, but when I reached out to some of my writerfriends, they confided that they experienced very similar waves of shock, followed by total freak-out. Just knowing I wasn’t alone made a huge difference, and I came out of my crazy feeling pretty good.

7.) You eventually received a whopping five offers of rep! Aieee! How did the agents offer rep? Via email? Or a cold call? 

Though I usually live in Washington, D.C., I'm currently in the middle of a year living in Melbourne, Australia.  I expected the time difference to be a big hindrance while querying, and it is true that my sleep really suffered.  I kept waking up at 3 AM to check my email, because that’s when business hours in New York City were underway. 

In the end, though, I found it to be really helpful.  Agents would email me something like "I've just finished reading your manuscript, and would like to schedule a time to speak with you on the phone about it." Pretty chill, right? It meant I could get my utter panic out of the way, get a glass of water, go to the bathroom, blow my nose, etc., and seem totally professional and together by the time I spoke on the phone. 

I was still a nervous wreck for the first couple of calls, but after that I actually started to get used to it, against all odds. (I am NOT a telephone person!) The important thing is not to let your nervousness or excitement get in the way of asking the questions you need to ask to make your decision.

8.) What sort of questions did you ask the offering agents? 

I spoke with all of the offering agents on the phone, and many of them more than once.  Communication was the big thing for me--I knew I needed an agent who was accessible, and could help me through the process of being a first-time novelist.  I also asked about extent of editorial input, whether the offer was for one book or for my career, and if they had a submission plan in mind.

9.) What questions did you find to be the most helpful in making a final decision?

One of the most helpful questions of all was, "Would you mind if I spoke to a couple of your clients?"  I had actually contacted a couple of writers to ask about their agents before I received offers.  I really don’t recommend doing this unless you are certain you’re not writing to ask them for a referral.  Writers get those kinds of emails all the time, and they can tell the difference.  I only reached out to people I somewhat knew already through the blogosphere, and only when I was reasonably sure they wouldn’t think I was crazy--and I never asked for them to refer me to their agent or look at my manuscript. 

After receiving an offer, though, as long as both agent and client are willing, talking to the client can be invaluable! I didn’t get anyone who had anything negative to say about their agents, but you can tell a lot from what they emphasize.  Some emphasized their agent’s keen business sense, while others said how much fun the agent was to work with, while others praised their agent’s editorial instincts.  It's a matter of picking which factors matter the most to you.

10.) How did you end up choosing only one agent? Sales record? Client referrals? Phone conversation? 

I'd love to say I made a chart and ranked all the factors numerically and added them up and had a completely logical and repeatable way of deciding.  In fact, I longed for someone to hand me a nice, final, impersonal way of determining which was the perfect agent for me.  In the end, though, I went with my gut.

I knew Josh was the agent for me after I spoke to him on the phone--but I didn’t know I knew. I had two other agents who I had really great conversations with, including someone who was one of my original dream agents. How can you turn down your dream agent?  My instincts were certain that Josh was the one I wanted to sign with, but it was a matter of convincing myself that I could trust those instincts.  So I spoke with all of them again on the phone, I spoke with their clients via phone and email, I researched them all on Publisher’s Marketplace, I asked every single person I knew with connections to the publishing industry for their opinions. 

In the end I realized I'd made my decision days ago, that first time I talked with Josh. I was drafting up rejection letters for the agents to prepare myself and I realized I just couldn’t write one for him. When I wandered out of my room in a daze and told my housemate and CP that I thought I was going to go with Josh, she said, "Yeah, I know. What, are you just getting this now?"  Apparently, I was one of the last people to realize I’d made my decision already.

11.) Looking back now, what sort of advice do you have for writers who find themselves with multiple offers? What should they do? What shouldn't they do? 

Don’t panic. Remember that you queried all of these agents for a reason, and that you’ll be in great hands with whoever you choose.

Keep an open mind. It's great to go into the process with "dream agents" in mind, but what you think you want may not actually be what you want when it comes down to it.  If you find yourself changing your mind, don’t resist it, and don’t feel guilty. Go with your heart and your gut. 

Don’t feel guilty about rejecting agents. This is part of the job for them, and of course they're going to be disappointed, but you have to do what’s best for you and your book and your career.  And don't burn any bridges, because you’re going to be in the book business with them moving forward. This is your chance to show them how much you appreciate and respect what they do, even if you’re not going to sign with them.

Take your time. Set a deadline for a week or ten days and don’t make a decision before then.  Let things percolate and simmer. If an agent pressures you to make a fast decision, he or she is NOT the agent for you. 

Enjoy it! Even if most of you is panicking, try to keep that one shred of sanity that’s dancing a dance and going "Woohoo! I did it!" Because hey… you did do it.

Thanks so much Meg for the wonderful interview! Best of luck with THE IRON WOOD!